The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
Beautifully written! I pray that party takes place in heaven with all of your family present. Blessings!
04/18/05
beautiful story
All we have to depend on is Jesus...He is my rock
Yeshua Bless
04/20/05
Beautiful story. I enjoyed reading it very much. Well done.
:( and :) This evoked both sadness and hope within me. Liked the contrast idea. Good interpretation of the topic.
Wow. Though there was an unexpected sadness at the end, I really liked this. You were real, raw; life isn't always storybook perfect. I really think you did a great job on this. I look forward to reading more of your work.