The Official Writing Challenge
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03/05/07
What a lovely way to use this week's topic! Nice poetry, with a very sweet message.

I thought the analogy was a bit weak in the fifth stanza, but very strong everywhere else.

03/06/07
This is a wonderful poem threaded with creativity! I noticed several stanzas were off in the meter, but your rhyming skills are wonderful. I enjoyed reading it! Keep writing poetry. Blessings, Jo
I like the idea of sewing two hearts in marriage. Very creative.
The third stanza is my favorite. I love the idea you have used throughout of God sewing us together in marriage. Beautiful!
This is very nice. It's tender, and I like the thought they we are sewn together in marriage.
03/07/07
beautiful image displayed beautifully. I enjoyed this very much!
Great way to picture a truth. Good job. If you wanted to edit a bit more you could clean up some of the off meter stanzas.
I enjoyed this! Thanks.
03/07/07
What a creative way to use sewing, how true as well. A great read.
03/07/07
A very sweet poem and a nice idea. I enjoyed this. Thanks for sharing it
03/11/07
Wonderful. Thank you. God bless and keep writing.