The Official Writing Challenge
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03/01/07
I liked the way that you told this story. I'm glad that Grams El made it back to her old self. Good job!
I liked this. A good moral to it. One thing, the words sew and sewn used as they are here (she began to sew kindness and love... and she thanked God every day for His love sewn in the community...), should be sow and sown. Like sowing seed.

Good writing all the same.