The Official Writing Challenge
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Wonderful article of generations of stories being passed down through a quilt. very well written, a few errors (The last sentence in the first paragraph is not a question.)But overall, a very well written nostalgic story.
03/03/07
This is a touching story. It needs just a bit of proofreading for grammatical errors, but that's simple to fix...and you can always find someone who'd be kind enough to take a few moments if you go on the boards and ask. Your mentioning "sister's" which should have been "sisters" confused me. I wondered if Danielle had been her older sister, at first. It's a delightful story. I can only imagine having such a treasure in my family. I know it wouldn't come from me, though!