The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a good challenge. I would have prefered to see it pictured with words, rather than told. But, nonetheless, a good goal has been set here.
I agree this is an admirable goal. Your words are a challenge to all of us. You expressed yourself clearly. Nice work
Your words challenge us all towards balance, something you point out is out of whack in our society. So true. You make a good point, here, and give us a pie to measure up against. However, you have quite a few grammatical errors that interfere with your wise words. Perhaps you could find proofreader to help. It's tough leading us to visualize a pie through your writing, but you've done a good job of it. Now, if you'll excuse me, for some unknown reason I find myself hungry for pie!