The Official Writing Challenge
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This is a good challenge. I would have prefered to see it pictured with words, rather than told. But, nonetheless, a good goal has been set here.
02/25/07
I agree this is an admirable goal. Your words are a challenge to all of us. You expressed yourself clearly. Nice work
02/26/07
Your words challenge us all towards balance, something you point out is out of whack in our society. So true. You make a good point, here, and give us a pie to measure up against. However, you have quite a few grammatical errors that interfere with your wise words. Perhaps you could find proofreader to help. It's tough leading us to visualize a pie through your writing, but you've done a good job of it. Now, if you'll excuse me, for some unknown reason I find myself hungry for pie!