The Official Writing Challenge
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This was a good story. Well written. Be careful, however, of apostrophes. I noticed it in Dad's and doctor's, there may have been more. It should read Dads and doctors.
This story definitely got my attention and I held my breath until the injuries were treated. Placing spaces between the paragraphs would be helpful for clarity, but the story is enjoyable just as it is.