The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
That's so sweet. I hope I have such a great marriage as the character's seems.
I liked the message of this piece, but I was a little confused by the emphasis on her being too tired to go to church. I was expecting some sort of explanation on this, but it was never given. I just found it a bit confusing. And there were a couple of tense changes also. Nice story though.