The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
I liked the little snippets of this man's life, and the general format.

Grammar and structure could use a bit of polishing in places, but there was nothing major.

I liked the connection to the spiritual health at the end. Keep writing!
02/22/07
A very nice way to look at this man's life and an interesting take on the topic. Nice work
02/24/07
I enjoyed this potted biography. I struggled a bit with the first paragraph, but probably becaseu I didn't get all the cultural allusions - being from the other side of the Atlantic. Well done.
03/01/07
You've done it again, my Favorite writer!! Great job of telling it like it is...from childhood to manhood. Loved the straight forward way you handled life with a dash of wit intermingled with the down side of said subject. Always leaves me with something to muse, ponder and think about. Missed you last week Pauly! Stay the Course...don't be absent! Orders from headquarters...lol (PS: And I've been one of those earth travelers asking the man for advice, too) and "HE IS"....always there.