The Official Writing Challenge
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Words well spoken. I love the emphasis placed on scripture. Keep writing for God.
02/24/07
Some great points here, and I really liked the analogy and the way you extended it and organised your thoughts. For me, it would have hit home harder to make some of the same points in a piece of fiction or parable - perhaps just an expression of my reading preference. Good stuff, and keep writing.
02/26/07
Very nice "walk" through these appropriate Bible verses. You really did some research here and it shows. Nice job
02/27/07
You have done an extensive job of research for this piece. It is so meaty! I found myself wishing that it was, somehow, broken up, perhaps into sections. I think that, if you did this, putting a heading on every section, that it would be a lot easier to follow. You have some TREMENDOUS points here! Of course they are: they come straight out of the Bible. I like the contrast from the physical emphasis to the spiritual emphasis. You've done a super job. Perhaps it's late and I'm tired, but I'd sure like these excellent points to be organized into sections for me so that I wouldn't miss them!
02/28/07
Excellent exhortation, and so full of spiritual truth! I would have loved a few examples from "real life" thrown in here and there, but this was very solid as is.
02/28/07
I agree with all of the above--great truths put together well, and tied in with the physical act of walking. I, too, would have enjoyed some fictious examples or ones from real life. Good job!
02/28/07
This has a lot of potential-I bet you could expand a bunch with this. Very well done, I enjoyed reading it and comparing it to my own life as well. Thanks for sharing! ^_^