The Official Writing Challenge
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I read through yours and you used easy to read words. It has a nice flow to it and you were able to impart your lessons without sounding too preachy. Good job! c",)
02/22/07
A good story with a good message. I particularly liked the light touch at the end. Well done.
Good message. Good pov.
I liked it too. great comparison between physical and spirtual fitness.
02/26/07
A very good story and it holds a dual challenge for many. I liked the relationship between the characters and I enjoyed the ending. Good work