The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
Great start, and I enjoyed the whole piece, but I'd have liked more. You left me with a lot of questions. Although maybe some question are good, I felt this could have been longer... thank you for sharing it.
02/26/07
Simple but to the point. A nice comparison. I think this would be a good one to expand a bit. Keep writing!