The Official Writing Challenge
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I really liked this approach--very vivid.

I was unclear who the narrator was--was actually a bit surprised to see the "I" introduced in a paragraph toward the end. I think this would work just as well entirely in the third person.

Your depictions of Jesus' heart were marvelous and meaningful.
Creative approach. I'm not certain what the paragraph referring to him 'wanting to offer himself to the hungary' means. I'm sure my husband will enlighten me :) Good work.

Excellent word usage. I enjoyed many, many, many of these sentences. You lost me a few times in your meaning but overall this was well put together. Good job!
A very good approach to the topic though I agree there were moments when it wasn't too clear. Good job