The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
God does have His way of throwing us for a curve, doesn't He?

"High school" should not be capitalized unless it is part of the name of a specific high school. Also, try putting thoughts in italics to help separate it from the rest of the text.

Great message over all. Keep writing.
Good lesson. Run to finish.
Good lesson in keeping one's focus.
02/25/07
A very good lesson and an enjoyable story. Your transition from the race to the winner seemed somewhat abrupt but this was a good story just as it is. Well done