The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
God does have His way of throwing us for a curve, doesn't He?

"High school" should not be capitalized unless it is part of the name of a specific high school. Also, try putting thoughts in italics to help separate it from the rest of the text.

Great message over all. Keep writing.
02/22/07
Good lesson. Run to finish.
02/24/07
Good lesson in keeping one's focus.
02/25/07
A very good lesson and an enjoyable story. Your transition from the race to the winner seemed somewhat abrupt but this was a good story just as it is. Well done