The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
This story totally delighted me! Wonderfully creative portrayal of life from a dog's point of view--and what a character of a dog, especially begging for coffee! Reminded me of the Sprnger Spaniel I had as a child--Daisy loved to eat everything from roses to spiders to grapefruit rinds!

The title sparked my curiosity too--who could resist reading about someone named "Mr. Grump"? Also enjoyed the "doggie-human dialogue"! Great job!
The storyline is very simple but it left me with a feeling of something that I should be doing diligently aside from thinking how much calories I should lose...that is, start my day right with the Lord. Good lesson!
02/22/07
I love this! "Mr. Grump" is a perfect name for this doggy, and the story very sweetly depicts the relationship between Mr. Grump and his owner.
I enjoyed this too. I always like to hear what pets think about their owners. Interesting.
This is charming. I love stories with animals portayed like this. There are a few little grammar and punctuation errors, but they don't detract from this cute story. Thank you for sharing this.
02/25/07
A cute POV and a delightful story! I enjoyed this very much and loved the relationship between Jilly and the dog. Good work