The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
This was pretty good. I'd expand on it a bit, and maybe explain more of your feelings. Also, a blank line between paragraphs makes it much easier on the eyes. Keep writing!
Good story. I especially liked the line: "Do you see me? I’m the One cheering you on.” A good point to remember.
02/25/07
Very easy to understand and relate to. I loved the part about God cheering her on. A very enjoyable story. Nice work