The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the end. I had to re-read to get the sense of who each part was . You did a good job. Very clever.
Your idea is very creative. The title, the names, and the ending that pulled it all together. Nice work.
Very creatively done.
Wow! What a cool idea! I liked the story of the three friends as it was but the ending when they came together was unexpected and masterful! A very original concept and I enjoyed it
That was a great read! Well done with the surprise ending. You caught the essence of our inner struggle beautifully! May we all reach the top someday...
Caught me off guard at the end. Well done with good spiritual meaning.