The Official Writing Challenge
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02/22/07
I loved the end. I had to re-read to get the sense of who each part was . You did a good job. Very clever.
Your idea is very creative. The title, the names, and the ending that pulled it all together. Nice work.
Very creatively done.
02/25/07
Wow! What a cool idea! I liked the story of the three friends as it was but the ending when they came together was unexpected and masterful! A very original concept and I enjoyed it
02/27/07
That was a great read! Well done with the surprise ending. You caught the essence of our inner struggle beautifully! May we all reach the top someday...
02/28/07
Caught me off guard at the end. Well done with good spiritual meaning.