The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/07
This is a wonderful account of God's blessing upon Bezalel and God's fulfilled promise to Bezalel. At times, the threading of Bezalel's thoughts were not easily followed. A tighter POV of Bezalel thoughts would give it a concise punch. Overall, I liked the exchange of Moses encouraging Bezalel. I felt Bezalel arrive to a peaceful conclusion in his heart that the Lord would see him through.
This could very easily be turned into a Sunday School lesson paper. Good work.
02/17/07
How amazing! :) I had just finished reading a piece on the Intermediate level about Bezalel ("In the Shadow of God"), and then I come to Beginners, and the first story I read is yours! I was drawn to your piece by the title and enjoyed the entire read. Thank you for sharing this!
02/22/07
I'm glad you told this story! I wasn't familiar with it and I was glad to read about it. This is nicely done. Keep writing!
03/22/07
Wonderful. Imaginative but so real, as if living the experience as it was being written or read. Thank you.

God bless and keep writing.