The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
I have been there! As the spouse who can prepare parties well, I have had to come to terms that my husband cannot, even when he tries, but then...the dishes are always done, the car is always clean, my clothes are put away... in a million other ways he tells me he loves me.

Apart from a couple of spelling mistakes, and the middle where I to read twice to see you were talking about your wedding day, I thought this was a lovely piece.
Ha! Made me laugh. Also made me think about what 'real' love is as opposed to 'romance'. Good one.
Like Corinne, I needed to read the middle twice to figure out you were back at your wedding day, the piece was good. It was true to life and shows how many people feel. Most everyone can put themselves in your shoes.
04/24/05
Can relate! Good job!