The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/07
I really enjoyed the vivid descriptions in this--the hands "floating" over the glass panes and so on. I could see everything clearly and feel both the beauty and the pain. Great paradoxical message! Was also grabbed by the unusual title.
02/16/07
A very intriguing title and I felt the impact of his hammer as he shattered the glass. A very good story and it worked well as a metaphor. Good job
Good word pictures. Thanks.