The Official Writing Challenge
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02/15/07
A very nice and amusing story. How nice that Kyle was mature enough to forgive you. Nice ending, too. Good job!
02/16/07
Wonderful story. Good writing. The pov fit in nicely. Forgiven by a carpenter.
03/11/07
This is touching and humorous. I really like your descriptions in your writings and the way you teach a lesson through each of your them and your word pictures. I could relate to this one but my accident in a college Stage Desisgn class ended up with a stapler gun going bizerko,grin. Needless to say I stick to manual staplers anymore,hehe. Thank you also for your feedback. God bless your work and keep on writing as you are truly gifted hon.:0)