The Official Writing Challenge
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I really enjoyed reading this. What a neat way to bring in the craft aspect.
Thanks for the gentle reminder not to forget those that contributed to our spiritual growth over the years... especially once they become house-bound.
03/17/07
Agree that the message is good and needs to be remembered, especialy by those who still can do something for those who can't.

Kurt, under your bio you mentioned appreciating anyone who made a comment on your writing. It is well written, good flow, kept the reader in it, but...yep, but you mentioned after the young people introduced themselves you had them introduce themselves. Otherwise, no changes suggested.

I like the use of Mr. "Youngblood" for the older man.

God bless and kep on writing!