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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Craft (as in handcraft) (02/08/07)

TITLE: craft (i)
By Donald Paulson
02/13/07


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Toe, I’m Sorry


(THUMP)

“Oh, OW, OW, OW, Ow, Ow,… ow…ow…ow.…”

“Oh…oh…oh…where did that come from?”

Oh dear. My toe…oh…oh….”

“Who put that there? Oh yeh, I did, so I knew where it was.”

“Stupid toe. I’ve got so much to do today: Mary’s been gone and I need to find out what all the Pastor needs, I know I need to substitute for her at the prayer meeting tonight, set-up for her children’s church, and, well,…how am I going to do that with my foot throbbing like this?”

“I haven’t got time to go to the Doctor. The emergency room might be quicker.”

“Yeh, right, two hour wait. Ouch, I can barely walk on it. I think it’s broken. Where has Mary been anyway?”

“Why now? Lord, don’t you know I’ve got a full plate today? I’ve got so many things to do for You.”

“You’ve been neglecting a toe.”

“Neglecting a toe?”

“Yes”

“I don’t pay any attention to my toes…well, not until something like this happens.”

“You’ve been neglecting a toe.”

“A toe?” (Hmmm, I don’t see anything particular about this toe; other than it hurts)

“Not that toe.”

“But this is the one that’s hurting!”

“Not that toe, My toe.”

“Your toe? You mean Mary?”

“Yes”

“Your…toe….I’m sorry, Lord, forgive me for ignoring Mary. Now I know why Your Body, our Church, has been limping along; Mary has been hurting and we’ve not been taking care of her. Thank you, Lord Jesus, I understand now we both really are fearfully and wonderfully made. I will see Mary right now.”

“Ouch. Uh…Lord, uh…about my toe…?”


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Myrna Noyes02/16/07
Very interesting piece! It made me smile! :) It did seem a bit weak on topic, though. I'll probably think more of my toes for awhile, anyway! :) Good spiritual message, too!
Angela M. Baker-Bridge 02/21/07
Interesting idea... though it felt like it ended before I could get my bearings as to where you were taking me. Maybe more of your clever insight into Mary's pain before going to see her?
Edy T Johnson 02/23/07
I like the lively monologue between "me, myself, and I," but I sort of have to agree with the previous commenters. It seems you might have more to tell regarding the "craft" part of the story---or maybe we aren't getting the drift? Anyway, you do have talent and you give us an entertaining read. Thank you, too, for your comment on my "Sidetracks" story---I sure appreciate it!


   
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