The Official Writing Challenge
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04/18/05
Interesting twist on the topic. Well written
A ending with impact. Very nicely done.
04/20/05
Very well told. The end was a bit painful - but in a good way. It made me call my mom to say hello.

dave
04/23/05
Yes, great ending. I loved some of your lines too, like the skin of cigarette smoke on the walls.
04/25/05
well done madonna...a good write. Makes you stop and think as all good works do. look forward to your next one.
blessings, kazza...