The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the subject of your piece. The thing that struck me is that are you only thinking about helping someone else or are you actually doing it. It's a good question we should all ask ourselves. Just thinking about something is the same as not doing it. I thought your format could have been tightened up a bit. Keep writing
A good thought here. I could be wrong (I often am), but I don't think you should say "is gone". You either need to say "has gone" or simply "is fishing".
Hi,

This is very thought provoking in asking your questions.

Blessings,

Teresa
02/14/07
It's good to follow your mind when you want to do good. I expect soon you will be carrying out your thoughts.