The Official Writing Challenge
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I enjoyed the subject of your piece. The thing that struck me is that are you only thinking about helping someone else or are you actually doing it. It's a good question we should all ask ourselves. Just thinking about something is the same as not doing it. I thought your format could have been tightened up a bit. Keep writing
A good thought here. I could be wrong (I often am), but I don't think you should say "is gone". You either need to say "has gone" or simply "is fishing".

This is very thought provoking in asking your questions.


It's good to follow your mind when you want to do good. I expect soon you will be carrying out your thoughts.