The Official Writing Challenge
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Very nicely written. Brings out some excellent points.
Enjoyed this piece. I was a little confused with Ben's age. You call him a little boy, but he spoke more like a teen (which to me fit very well into the story.) I like the line "And in the realms of heaven, the greatest fisherman of all began to wind in His line. "And in the realms of heaven, the greatest fisherman of all began to wind in His line." I'm not sure whether you meant Jesus or the dead father here, but I like to think it was the father, reaping what he had sown in his son.