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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Gone Fishing (02/01/07)

TITLE: Little Fishies
By Kurt Youngdale
02/07/07


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BLINDED

SIDE A
LITTLE FISHIES
(from the lp ‘Lead by the hand’)

Verse I:
One little fishy in the sea
One little fishy in the sea
Cast off your burdens and follow me
One little fishy in the sea

Verse II:
Two little fishies in the sea
Two little fishies in the sea
Cast your eyes to heaven and trust in me
Two little fishies in the sea

Chorus:
Mamma, I don’t want to go
Where there’s no love for me
Mamma, I don’t want to join
The fishies in the deep blue sea

Bridge/Ending:
The fisherman casts his line
The fisherman casts his line
The fisherman casts his line
Into the deep blue sea

Guitar Solo

The fisherman casts his line
The fisherman casts his line
The fisherman casts his line
Into the deep blue sea

Repeat Verse I
Repeat Verse II
Repeat Chorus
Ending to Fade

SIDE B
JUDGEMENT COMES
(previously unreleased)

Verse I:
Look at the shoes she’s wearing
They are so last year
Look at that dress she’s wearing
The color of her hair

Bridge I:
She must have missed the memo
She must have missed the style
She must have been secluded
For a very great while

Chorus I:
Somebody should tell her
Before it gets too late
That she should look like we look
And she shouldn’t hesitate
That she should look like we look
And she shouldn’t hesitate

Verse II:
Hear the things she’s saying
She doesn’t sound like us
There’s no care she’s driving
She has to take the bus

Bridge II:
She must have missed the program
She must have missed the vlue
Now she’s missed the big time
What’s she gonna do?

Chorus II:
Somebody should tell her
Before it get too late
She should act like we act
And she shouldn’t hesitate
She should act like we act
And She shouldn’t hesitate


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Jan Ackerson 02/09/07
Goodness, I wish I could hear these songs! That's the one disadvantage of posting lyrics; the impact is lost a little bit without the melody. But I certainly enjoyed imagining these being performed, and they both have very good messages.
Janice Fitzpatrick02/12/07
This is really touching and makes one think. I relaly like the tempo of the whole piece and the lyrics are so moving. I wish I could hear this song. I too write songs but am looking for a person who can write the notes once heard as I write both lyrics and tune but have to just put on a cassette or dependon memory as I don't have experince in musical note writing. I want to get them set up for guitar and piano. God bless your writing. Keep up the great work!