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A very nice read and I like your discriptive words. I think every one can relate. Good job!
Now THIS is a unique perspective! Well done!

There's a minor tense shift in the first paragraph, but other than that, I have nothing but praise for this devotional. Very well done.
Shows us how frail we humans are and how God intervenes. I especially liked the second paragraph.
Thank you for expressing feelings and actions of many of us. Peter had to collect his thoughts and how better to do so than fishing for a fisherman. Just what we need to do. God bless.
I like your use of the boat, fishing, water, etc. to illustrate our foolishness in trying to chart our on course. This would be good in a devotional book for men -- many would relate to the fishing analogies.
A very nice devotional :) Good job!
Very creative concept. Good job. God bless.
Beautiful message with nothing unnecessary. Your short little story says it all! Good job! Blessings, Jo