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A very nice read and I like your discriptive words. I think every one can relate. Good job!
02/09/07
Now THIS is a unique perspective! Well done!

There's a minor tense shift in the first paragraph, but other than that, I have nothing but praise for this devotional. Very well done.
Shows us how frail we humans are and how God intervenes. I especially liked the second paragraph.
02/10/07
Thank you for expressing feelings and actions of many of us. Peter had to collect his thoughts and how better to do so than fishing for a fisherman. Just what we need to do. God bless.
02/10/07
I like your use of the boat, fishing, water, etc. to illustrate our foolishness in trying to chart our on course. This would be good in a devotional book for men -- many would relate to the fishing analogies.
02/11/07
A very nice devotional :) Good job!
02/14/07
Very creative concept. Good job. God bless.
02/14/07
Beautiful message with nothing unnecessary. Your short little story says it all! Good job! Blessings, Jo