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02/09/07
Cute idea--chaplain as fisherman.

Just a thought--chidren of this age would probably think being a fisherman for a career was really cool...so I'm not sure why the little boy felt a bit embarrassed. And a classroom of 20-some students couldn't have ALL exiciting dads; surely some of them would have been accountants or office managers, etc.

I like the way you portrayed the little boy's POV and mixed emotions--nice job!