The Official Writing Challenge
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You so captured the personality of the little boy in this story. This was very engaging, good job!
02/08/07
Quite charming!
The way we share both our time and the words from the Bible make such a significant difference in the lives of those placed in our care - your writing has shown both of these qualities; and that child is doubly blessed.
I guess I repeat myself constantly saying "good story!", but that's how I feel. I like the fact that Poppy finished the story at home. It made me feel that the rapport of the characters was more important than the Jonah story.
02/13/07
Cute story! Reggie was wonderful!!
Cute and fun to read. I like the character of Reggie.
02/14/07
I really liked this. Espeially the comparison to the Andy Griffith Show. It made it all so easy to picture and enjoy. Nice work.