The Official Writing Challenge
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02/13/07
This is a start, the idea is right. Break up paragraphs for readability and have someone proof your work.
Creative approach - gave readers something to think about. It would be helpful to format presentation and proof read. Good job.
02/14/07
Super concept. A nice story. Work on the presentation some and you'll be moving up. Keep working. God bless.