The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story. Well written.
You did a good job of showing us how Chuck lived his life, and reminded us we should live that kind of life, too. Your characters are believable. Nicely done.
I really like the way you helped us to know Chuck, simply through your narrator's memories of him.
Well, I'll be golly bummed! LOL This is very good for your first shot at the challenge. :) Keep writing and enjoy the craft. Blessings. JoJo
Wow! This is pretty good for your first entry! Very, VERY good! I loved this voice, you did well on the internal dialogue and we got to know Chucker through the main character.

First time?! You're kidding! This is GOOD! I like the feel of this piece and you managed to weave emotions and truth into the story without taking away from it. ^_^
You made me wish I'd known "Chucker," too! :) Well-written piece!
Actions speak louder than words!" Most of our lives we light God's light shine through us by how we act and react more than by what we say! Excellent story