The Official Writing Challenge
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Good story. Well written.
You did a good job of showing us how Chuck lived his life, and reminded us we should live that kind of life, too. Your characters are believable. Nicely done.
02/10/07
I really like the way you helped us to know Chuck, simply through your narrator's memories of him.
02/10/07
Well, I'll be golly bummed! LOL This is very good for your first shot at the challenge. :) Keep writing and enjoy the craft. Blessings. JoJo
02/10/07
Wow! This is pretty good for your first entry! Very, VERY good! I loved this voice, you did well on the internal dialogue and we got to know Chucker through the main character.

WELL DONE! :)
First time?! You're kidding! This is GOOD! I like the feel of this piece and you managed to weave emotions and truth into the story without taking away from it. ^_^
02/15/07
You made me wish I'd known "Chucker," too! :) Well-written piece!
02/21/08
Actions speak louder than words!" Most of our lives we light God's light shine through us by how we act and react more than by what we say! Excellent story