The Official Writing Challenge
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Good point. Interesting story. Some things need a little more explanation however - like the fact that daddy had apparently been telling a story before he went looking for more worms. Keep up the good work.
i liked it keep writing
I like the last line.
The last paragraph is interesting. You're right ... we think we can do something by ourselves, and get so caught up in the moment, that we forget to call for help from Dad. Nice analogy.
Too Cute! I liked it a lot