The Official Writing Challenge
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02/08/07
Good story. Good point. It needs a little proofreading however. Spell check and grammar check alone are not enough!
02/09/07
I have to agree with the above comment, some errors here and there, making it a bit harder to read, but overall, the point was well made and the story well told.
02/13/07
Great story line. My only comments would be to work on verb tenses, as well as, noun and pronoun connections.
God bless your work.