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Previous Challenge Entry (Level 1 – Beginner)
Topic: Reading (01/25/07)

TITLE: Reader' Choice
By Janice Fitzpatrick
02/01/07


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A grandfather clock ticked away as

a pink nosed rodent scurried along the

ornamented detail. Large glass doors

opened…again. A flicker of tiny light

zipped through the keyhole and a

shadow of a feather capped youth leapt

above the woman at the desk. Phulov

had lost count of how many times

someone passed through the tinted

entrance way.

A once quiet room that occasionally

was interrupted by a few hushed voices

or the humming of an aquarium was now

filling quickly with familiar and not

so familiar faces and loud chattering.

The antiquated woman no longer sat

with arched brows of disapproval and

pursed lips but a proud smile.

This was the day that she had been

waiting and planning for so long.

A crowd of patrons formed an

informal circle while some of the

speakers sat staunchly in chairs,

others spreading out on the carpet or

a couch, while a few stole away into

the shadows of shelved books. Clad in

rusting armor a knight arose from the

round table. Clearing his throat he

spoke eloquently, “We of the well

written thoughts are honored to be

here today.” He continued, “I want to

offer our many thanks to the town of

Readalot and to the dear woman who has

made this event possible, Ms.

Information.”

The spectacled woman nodded and

blushed, “Thank you Arthur…” She

glanced around. “Each of you have

played an important part in many of

our lives and I’m pleased as punch to

have you here.”

“Punch. “Where is that rascal

anyways?” shrieked a scratchy voice.

An enormous scarlet patched nose poked

through the crowd as a bedraggled

woman held a stick high above her

head. “As I was saying,” continued

Ms. Information, “Society has been

deeply affected by each of you and we

would like to get to know everyone a

little better.”

A small girl dressed in anklets

and a smocked dress pulled on the

woman’s sleeve. “May I go first?” “No

Sally” a young boy sprang up by the

tiny lass. “Sit down.” The boy

impatiently escorted her to a

chair. “I want Jane”, she cried.

“Don’t look na kid, but Spots markin’

hiz territory,” guffawed a tall

gentleman with a lasso in one hand and

a revolver at his side.

“You sir,” Phulov made eye contact with the man in the ten gallon hat.

“Could you please introduce yourself?”

The cowboy spat a dark thickness from

a corner of his mouth and tipped his

hat. “Enna thung fo a lady” He strode

to the microphone,” Name’s Pecos Bill.”

“We read about you in our folklore

class,” clamored a voice from the

crowd. “Ain’t no tale, it be da

truth.” A click sounded from the

cowboy’s trigger. “That is something

sir,” A pair of white gloves appeared

as an English gent carefully wiped a

shelf, “I have been searching for but

it often eludes me.” “Ana thung you

say Sherlee”, spat Pecos. “For your

information my good fellow it is

Holmes, Sherlock Holmes,” retorted the

offended inspector.

A strong but gentle voice broke

the hubbub. “You speak of truth but

there is only One that is true.”

There was a silence among the group.

An illuminated figure walked calmly

amongst the throng of

spectators. “There have been words of

greatness told through the ages but

only One will change lives.”

Ms. Information flipped through

her notebook of invites. “Excuse me

sir, but I haven’t had the pleasure of

meeting you before.” “I’ve tried but

you don’t know me.” The man said sadly.

She turned away and looked down. Those

eyes… kind yet piercing, where had she

seen him before?

Who was he? “Whhat is your

name?” She stammered. “Yahweh”, was

the reply. “I’m sorry but I don’t see

it on the invitation," the once

composed woman now nervously flipped

through the pages bewildered.

“No Phulov,you never made time to

include me.”

The man searched her eyes. She

cleared her throat nervously,

“Everyone, snacks are in the activity

room, help yourself." With that the

crowd dispersed and headed for

refreshments.

As she turned around she saw that

He was gone. What’s this? She spied

a leather bound book on the desk and

began to thumb through it’s

contents. “The Word became flesh and

made His dwelling among us….” A paper

fell from the book. Reader’s Choice,

Signed, Jesus Christ. The humming of

the aquarium once again filled the

room as she slowly began reading, “In

the beginning…”


References:
Jn 17:3
1 Ti 2:4
Jn 1:14
Ge 1:1


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cindy yarger02/06/07
This was entertaining but I did get a bit lost in the format. I think it would have been a better read had it been in a more easily read style. Keep it up....
Janice Cartwright 04/29/13
This is one I missed somehow. Since I tend toward the obscure, writing that makes me THINK, this is one of my favorites of your submissions. It reflects a mind that burrows deep and a heart for the only truly worthwhile substance in life. And that is the
Lord and his Word. The other books were important enough to become flesh (in a sense), as you personified them, but were shown to be inferior to The Word made flesh. A very creative approach.


   
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