The Official Writing Challenge
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Thought provoking. I really liked this. It made me wonder what was going to happen next? Thank God for His Son who did just that, paid for our sins, in full. Keep the writing. Very nicely done!
02/02/07
Fitting title, captivating end, well written all the way through. Great work!
02/03/07
You have captured in print my childhood vision of heaven while presenting the cold facts that we cannot enter heaven on our own merit. Excellent use of topic. Thank you!
02/03/07
Your descriptions were colorful. I did see the place you described. At the point in which Jesus opens the book, I really didn't know what to expect, suspenseful, which kept my interest. well written.