The Official Writing Challenge
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Interesting window into his life, but left only slightly opened, Enough there to interest a reader who would like to hear more. I liked the ending.
04/19/05
Great morning description!I could feel the drudgery. I would like to see this developed more :) Great job and entry!
Very simple and to the point. This is so true in most cases. I could feel the regret. I liked it.