The Official Writing Challenge
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Good illustration. Keep up the good work!
02/04/07
Very interesting and thought-provoking comments here. I understood your meaning clearly. Keep writing!
02/06/07
Really liked the first half, with your humour and unique writing voice. Good lesson on reading! :)
02/13/07
I loved this piece also; but to tell the truth I don't "get it" either. Am I dense? Am I missing a few marbles? Jesus and the Father are one,it says, and yet one was down here on Earth (the son, or so I thought) and the other was in Heaven (The Father I thought); see, for us simpleton's can't see two people as one somehow. But I still love your writing! It's just SO MUCH I don't understand in the Bible, but then I don't understand the party of the first, second and third part either...so I guess I'm hopeless. Thanks again Pauly for a terrific Read! My hero!