The Official Writing Challenge
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Great job. It's a shame that we are limited to 750 words sometimes. I would love to hear the rest of the story frpm you waking up that morning to the person that wrote that today. Thanks for writing.
I wholeheartedly agree! This needs page upon page of your kind of "showing while telling", perhaps it is already a book in the making. If not, could you at least give us a few more pages at FW. I hope so. If you do, send me a message so I'll know to watch for it.
Very thought-provoking! This was chilling when I realized how you'd had the dream. Good work! Would definately like to see more to this story.
Smooth writing, good dialogue, great lesson. Some line breaks would have made for an easier read but still, a very nice piece!
I especially connected to your illustration - the child in us. This child in the dream represents all of us. The dialog was natural and very real. I could hear the conversation taking place between the child and his father. Your writing style held my attention and the end of your story was inspiring.