The Official Writing Challenge
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02/01/07
Great job. It's a shame that we are limited to 750 words sometimes. I would love to hear the rest of the story frpm you waking up that morning to the person that wrote that today. Thanks for writing.
02/01/07
I wholeheartedly agree! This needs page upon page of your kind of "showing while telling", perhaps it is already a book in the making. If not, could you at least give us a few more pages at FW. I hope so. If you do, send me a message so I'll know to watch for it.
02/02/07
Very thought-provoking! This was chilling when I realized how you'd had the dream. Good work! Would definately like to see more to this story.
02/02/07
Smooth writing, good dialogue, great lesson. Some line breaks would have made for an easier read but still, a very nice piece!
02/05/07
I especially connected to your illustration - the child in us. This child in the dream represents all of us. The dialog was natural and very real. I could hear the conversation taking place between the child and his father. Your writing style held my attention and the end of your story was inspiring.