The Official Writing Challenge
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02/02/07
Wonderful title! I also especially enjoyed your descriptive first paragraph! There were some spelling and punctuation errors that proofreading could fix, though.

I was totally "in tune" with what you were sharing, as I have experienced similar joys when reading! :)
A good message here about what books can do for your life and enjoyment. Yes, there are a few errors in spelling, but your message is interesting and that's a good start. Good work!
Hm... (thoughtful pose) I've never read a more simple advocation for reading the Bible. Honestly, your word economy is excellent, and your message is straight to the point! It does tarry a bit, just to draw people in, and I think that's what makes this piece effective. You might check the first paragraph for minor typos, though. Overall, an amazing job!