The Official Writing Challenge
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This child sounds very creative. It's easy to understand why Tommy drew what he did, since there are many songs that say Jesus "died upon that tree". I love his way of expressing his feelings; sounds like someone taught him a way to share them. An interesting story. Keep writing!
Excellent content! You were able to weave scripture, pain, frustration and hope into a very real picture of life, while showing us the only way to cope--through prayer.
Tommy was being bullied, and it's sad that his Mom didn't recognize what he was trying to say through his drawings; my heart went out to him...and this story was creative but needs quite a bit of editing; but with practice - makes perfect. Keep at it and soon you'll be a Pro. God Bless.