The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
A lovely, lovely story. I am so glad she chose life, and the name Hope is a lovely choice. Nicely done.
01/30/07
Wonderful take on the subject! It took me a bit to follow because of the way the two stories were laid out - maybe use some astericks or italicize it:) Anyways, your writing is beautiful - with a little editing of punctuation and tense it will be even better!I hope you continue to write because you write vividly and with emotion.