The Official Writing Challenge
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I loved the contrast in your article. Keep on writing!
01/25/07
You made a great point in just a few words. I liked reading it and hope you will write more, next time.
01/30/07
Great devotional! Good easy to understand way of explaining your point! Only suggestion I have is to spell to 'too' - otherwise very nicely done - but maybe try to add a few more words through more examples or something next time - though I know a place that looks for short devotionals where this might work:)
Your simplicity again shocks me! Lol, I admit that it might take me two or three pages worth of babble to come to the point so precisely as you have here. You are economically-sound in everything I've read of yours so far. That's a gift within a gift, you know?