The Official Writing Challenge
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Very intriguing! Loved this. The ending was neat! Great job! Keep up the good work! God bless your talent!
01/25/07
A very cute story and a lovely romantic ending. It made me smile. Nice job.
01/27/07
Very cute story! I loved the title, and though I suspected where this was going, I still loved going along for the ride. Keep writing!
01/30/07
Wonderful twist to the story - and very romantic. I had trouble in the beginning following who it was about but it smoothed out and the rest flowed so nicely:) I liked the voice - the character seemed very real. A few punctuation needs but other than that - well written!