The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
I LOVE that swift "jab" at the end, the painting's title. You gave me chills! You write so very well, I think you would have no trouble entering at higher levels :)
Great writing! I loved how your words flowed. Good story and neat ending!
01/25/07
A great story and a good example of a child's imagination and ability to see things we sometimes cannot see. Good job.
01/30/07
This story reveals the little girl's sensitivity, wonder, creativity and spirituality. Well done! Especially in so few words, with just the right amount of reader imagination to complete the "picture." Congratulations!