The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
A wonderful story and I enjoyed reading it. You captured my attention through the entire tale. Good work
I'm smiling, too. Isn't it wonderful how God works to complete our lives. You told a warm story, concisely with a talent for keeping the reader engaged.
I really like this. It's a heartwarming story and I could 'see' what was going on. Good job!
01/29/07
This is an impressive piece of writing. You are too "advanced" to be in "beginners," I think :)

You manage to cover a lot of material within the word limit in your well-told story. Keep writing!
01/30/07
Charming story! A great main character, one that we can really fall for.

Be careful of adverb overuse. Most of your -ly words can be replaced with strong verbs and nouns.

I love this guy, and would read more about him.
01/31/07
Delightful story - I enjoyed your casual writing style.
01/31/07
Very smooth. A very good entry. God bless.