The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
A very nice poem. There were a few places where the rhymes were a bit of a stretch, but I enjoyed it nevertheless. Its sentiments are very true.
01/26/07
Lovely, thought-provoking questions in this piece. I wish you would show us those things in the poem itself. Use imagery with strong verbs and adjectives and keep growing. Great work.
01/31/07
A really neat poem, and I liked the Title. The meter was off a bit...but the thoughts came through loud and clear. Work toward a smoother rhythmic beat, but not at all bad for a beginner. Enjoyed the art it portrayed of the Master Artist.