The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
Wow! You left us hanging, and certainly made me wish you'd have finished the story. This was nicely written and I hope you'll consider finishing it.
01/31/07
Definately suspenseful! What happens? More details - sensory, visual, etc. - would also be nice, to help us see the museum and the professor. Please finish this piece! :)