The Official Writing Challenge
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01/25/07
Excellent story! This was very skillfully done; I loved the transformation from before to after the Fall. A very creative way to tell the story. Great job!
01/25/07
Excellent story! This was very skillfully done; I loved the transformation from before to after the Fall. A very creative way to tell the story. Great job!
01/31/07
A vivid description of Paradise Lost, and then another of Paradise renewed; very creative...and straight from the Bible; nicely done and well written. Thanks for reminding us of what Jesus did for us.
01/31/07
Neat images here; really like the contrast between the three Edens, especially with the fallen Eden juxtaposed against the ugliness of the first news story.
This was really interesting. I like the way you portrayed the story. Good job. Good writing.