The Official Writing Challenge
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01/29/07
I like this. Your struggle is very intense. At first glance it seems that hope is slipping, but I read through three times and got a good sense that really the struggle itself spells victory. I liked the rain being called God's teardrops. Great job - keep at it!
01/29/07
This is intense but written in a very descriptive way. You definitely captured a mood here. Keep writing!
01/31/07
Wow, such depth. Has to be read more than once to get to the soul of this poetic essay that tells a story; but it takes a deep mind. Beautifully done.