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God's promise is SURE! The plot is weaved nwell between her musings and the blank canvas on which she expressed her hope.
God's promise is SURE! The plot is weaved nwell between her musings and the blank canvas on which she expressed her hope.
God's promise is SURE! The plot is weaved nwell between her musings and the blank canvas on which she expressed her hope.
God's promise is SURE! The plot is weaved well between her musings and the blank canvas on which she expressed her hope.
God's promise is SURE! The plot is weaved well between her musings and the blank canvas on which she expressed her hope.
01/28/07
A great story in faith, the ending was definitely a surprise. Well done!
01/28/07
Great description, especially in the beginning of this. I wish you had spent a bit less time on the "bad" part of the marriage and a bit more on the "good" part - it almost felt like an afterthought. Wonderful detail - I was completely swept away. I doubt you will be in beginners long!
01/28/07
A sad story but a happy ending. God took her tragedy and made it into His promise of victorious living. You wrote from the heart and you did it well.
01/28/07
I like how Kadee was faithful to Gary even when he kicked her out and her friends were telling her to forget him. Great illustration of God's faithfulness to us.

I agree that it would have been nice to spend more time on the restored marriage. It is easy to dwell on the bad, but would make the mourning more realistic to focus on the restoration more than just one sentence.

Great technique tp have the canvas get painted while we were off learning Kadee's story. It shows the healing power of art. Great job!
01/29/07
A wonderful story of reconciliation. Work a bit on developing a style that is not so heavy on narration, and help your readers to get more inside your character's soul. Thanks for sharing this poignant tale.
01/31/07
I loved this one - things that bring back memories.
01/31/07
Well-told story with a good message about God's power working in response to our faith in Him and our prayers to Him. Thank you!